Eyes of a True Friend

Eyes of a True Friend

A Poem by J

I dedicate this poem to someone who was once very special to me.Until now she is,but a lot of things have changed.


I once had a friend

Who was amazing in my sight

She calls me her teddy bear

Whenever I hug her tight


Oh how I love her so

I wish we could go back

To times when we were happy

Not times when we were sad 


Yes,without saying a word

My friend would already know

That I had a dark and shallow world

And how I needed her so


Only we can truly see

What matters with her and me

In the eyes of a true friend

Friendships never end



© 2009 J

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i think that you are totally right when you said :"In the eyes of a true friend , Friendships never end "
this was another lovely poem of yours and so honest . May God keeps all your friends with and near you

Posted 5 Years Ago

it shows so much love!


Posted 8 Years Ago

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tama good write

Posted 9 Years Ago

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A really good write about friendship which is true and ever-lasting ... really good :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is really nice in a very chaste way ..your writes arereally honest ..keep writing ..:)

Posted 9 Years Ago

A very good poem. Friendship sometime goes away for a while. We keep them in our mind and heart. I like the story and your flow of words. Ending was excellent.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Wonderful poem about friendship... true friendship, which is much needed throughout our lifetime. Really nice job with this write!

Posted 9 Years Ago

This is a nice tribute to a wonderful friendship. If only these relationships would always remain forever. Nice write!

Posted 9 Years Ago

This is such a beautiful dedication to someone who knew you so well and cared deeply for who you were... who you are becoming too... I loved the glimpses of this friendship and the last passage is simply perfect. Excellent write!

Posted 9 Years Ago

I think it is a really sweet poem.
Great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Last Updated on December 6, 2009




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