Gratitude

Gratitude

A Poem by J
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I miss ..... and I thank .....

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When my life began as a new person

I was down and under everything

Sad and frustrated

You came and showed me something

That something was beyond what I expected

It was real and unwinding

What was it that I saw?

Not saw but felt a new feeling

I felt so connected and so contented

 

Time passed and I was renewed

I started to laugh 

I started to live for the first time

Thanks to that person

Who gave me a hand when I needed it

Who showed me a smile when he felt it 

Who showed me love he knew it 

 

After everything that has been done 

I thank that person 

Who turned my life around

Turned my frown upside down

THANK YOU

..Someone..

© 2009 J


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it is, good . . . wonderful to have met that someone . . . may you be that someone to someone else . . .

Posted 9 Years Ago


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kd
easily understood, and good topic

Posted 9 Years Ago


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There is no such thing as bad poetry if it's written with love to another.. as a tribute to their heart! You conveyed a clear and beautiful image of what someone has done for you with MERE presence and feeling.. what you feel for them as well. Great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very good.. Flows so smooth and the message is wonderful.
Thank you for the read request, a wonderful write!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I like it. Flowed well. We need those folks in a life that can make us laugh. A excellent poem.
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