Focus

Knows how to create diamonds
but somehow continues to falter
Since when did I become such a drifter?
Drowning on the same cycle
Turning a blind eye to potential pitfalls
Always fixated on the outcome
rather than the process
Words and actions aren't of great symmetry
Please be patient and build consistency

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Perhaps faltering and drifting give you time to see more, tisnt always a flaw to stop and look, you know. But, if you want to rush through life, well, tis a choice.. taken or regretted. Your words are a sort of juggle of thoughts that really set the mind thinking. Surely that can allow for symmetry? I so enjoy words that get me thinking about the content, thank you so much for sharing, haseel.

[Gabby The GAB]

"Turning a blind eye to potential pitfalls" ayosa nga linya, niiceee poeeem haseeel, write more :D

[haseeel]

Yieeet thanks Gabby the GAB :>

[YanZeros]

This is also challenging for me to do, to keep focus coz I'm restless by nature. I can relate to this write thanks for sharing. 😊

[haseeel]

Take time for yourself :> anyways, thanks for passin' by!