bullied.

it's a song about someone being bullied :(

v1)

Sat in the corner,

watching the world go by,

hoping that you'll help me,

coz, i'm too scared to try

 

v2)

In the classroom,

yet again all by myself

they keep calling me names

i don't know wether i'm good for my own health

 

bridge)

Help me

anyone will do

im being hurt

they've ripped my shirt

they've nicked my phone

i'm all alone- oh oh

 

chorus)

but,

no body cares,

no body tries

i'll tell the teachers

but the bullies make up lies

it's hard being me

if only you can see

how the bullies seem to treat me

　

　

Author's Note

only half a song! i haven't really got the ending sorted yet, so it will be updated as soon as i think it's ready :) x

Reviews

[zappy]

THIS IS REALLY GOOD !!!!!!

[Krista]

That is really deep and sad for me to read. I can really relate this a lot. I hope you do not get bullied.

[Luke]

that is really deep and i think it took alot of effort to write that, i think u are a really talented writer

[Rory CJ Frankson]

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Nope, no Poppy yet... I'll send her over. So what chords go with, I play and I can hear the song, and I think. The content that you are putting out there is really awesome. Youth violence and heavy bullying is out of control. If your on the wrong end, it's a living hell. By the base of your lyrics, it's you and what... they are the weaker, you know? It shows their insecurity and they need the support of the group. To think they are cool an tough. When really, they are pack of weakness that need the group logic. And, your sympathy!

If you are strong in yourself and don't laugh, or sneer at them. Say a prayer in your heart. That they receive the help they need. If they have hope and you show them nothing but smiles and, a ray of hope given. They will just eventually find someone else, who they can hurt with their insecurities, You never know, some few might surprise you and quit that group, and be. In your Rock Band! ;) Because you can let them know you support their creative talent... hey lets be friends an Rock. Maybe come over an we'll set you up, on WritersCafe...

They will see you for the beautiful talented young girl, that your are...
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Rock On /Write On / Right On >>>Ro... 05/26/10. 3:01pm Quesnel BC Canada ;)

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[Jessica]

Very great Jasmine. You have described really what I felt in primary. I can't wait to see the ending. Well done 100/100 x

[[KL]]

This is good so far.. But I personally don't think the last line of verse 2 fits with the rest.. its just a liiiiiiiiiittle too long. other than that, this is great =D 100/100 ;)