Wonder

Sometimes you wonder how things faded away.........

Wonder

 

You always used to say

It will all work out………ok

So where are you today?

 

And I wonder…………….

 

As the sunrise paints the land

I still don’t understand

Your final reprimand

 

And I wonder……………

 

And I wonder were we wasted time?

Cause I feel melancholy yet somewhat sublime

Still I wonder will I see you again?

And I wonder why I care

 

You never held my hand

As we walked across these lands

Is this what you’d always planned?

 

And I wonder…………….

 

As the sunset burns the sky

I think IF, ONLY and then WHY?

Was it all just one big lie?

 

And I wonder……………….

 

Now I wander cross the desert tonight

And I wonder where you are

And I wonder if you think of me………..ever

And I wonder why I care?

 

You always used to say

It will all work out………….ok

So where are you today?

 

And I wonder………………

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Lizzie Mitchell]

ughhhh I hate that feeling
like you're stuck inside your head
nothing you can DO
just think
and wonder
no ANSWERS
just QUESTIONS stuck inside your head
that's how this made me feel :)
and it's also how I've been feeling today
but I wonder.........
in the 9th line did you mean "where" we wasted time?
yet another great piece

[JD Jessop]

I will have to fix that line. Thanks for catching it! and thank you for the review :)

[Lizzie Mitchell]

you're welcome!

[TL Boehm]

A wonderful write. I received your message here at the Cafe regarding Mavguard. Please consider submitting - www.mavguardmagazine.com all submissions are being taken there - for poetry and fiction, and art/photography.

[JD Jessop]

Thank you for your comments and read TL :) I will look into Mavguard

[Sami Khalil]

It sounded like a good song. Some sad thoughts in it. Bravo..................

[JD Jessop]

Thank you for the compliment!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Good use of repetition with your message.
Relationships are difficult to maintain through a life time without some stress and some negative situations.
Breakups are hard to understand when you are the left behind...

[JD Jessop]

Thank you for looking this over Josie. It was written in an ancient time long ago for me but I thought it was good so I shared it