she makes me fly

she makes me fly

A Poem by she makes me weird
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although i can't say who this is for...i'm sure she will figure it out

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she makes me so...ooohhh

she makes my breath disappear

i can't contain it

© 2008 she makes me weird


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Words of excitement , he he

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such passionate emotions in so few words, very impressive.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hmmmm?.......

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely written. Passionate to say the least! Great write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Nicely penned senryu!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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she makes me weird
she makes me weird

the big one, TX



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I am simply me. I love life for the good and the bad. I write what I feel. So many aspects of life to be unturned and yet a little box to write about me... more..

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