Petals

What is real to your eyes in which is façade to mine

Tricks and tales of mirrors, of reflections crossing the line

I feel the wrath of your soul that turns oceans deep blue

I grasp the hand that yearns for my touch but just can’t see through

You see your reflection and bash it uncanny

No gentle soul could ever touch the deep blues, the deep blues in yours, oh no

But mine ever so fragile, ever so clear, turns that same ocean tide to a space far from home

It flips and turns and twists until all that’s left is everything your soul has missed

And that same deep blue you found peace within, has now a new hue of transparent bliss.

And your vessel no longer craves the reds and grays and blacks.

It knows no longer can it travel through the abyss and back

Our souls forever changed, forever the infinite petals on a rose

Spiraling, and spiraling, until we reach home

Reviews

[Daydreamer]

MAGNIFICENTLY WRITTEN! I love the last line so much; it gives an amazing background to your story over here 😍

[StrixNebulosa]

this was like reading secrets... quite lovely and thought provoking write. Makes me think that "home" is the ground, and we fall from the high of finding the truths of another...

[Awakened Rose]

What a lovely thought. I am glad you enjoyed my poem. You words mean a lot, thank you :)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

This was really nice and I love the way your words flow so nicely.

[Awakened Rose]

thank you :))

[A. Amos]

This is simply elegant and wonderful write, you wrote from the deepest part of your heart and while reading one can sense from soul...amazing piece of work my friend, keep it up.

[Awakened Rose]

this comment makes my heart happy. Thank you :)

[A. Amos]

you're most welcome my dear

[Frieda P]

Love 'hue of transparent bliss', quite like this one, its essence is pure. Kudos!

[Awakened Rose]

Thank you :)