#7

#7

A Chapter by jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

thunder pulses skyward
tracing staccato heartbeats
distance rendered moot


© 2011 jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)


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I adore the second line...adds such depth! xx

Posted 12 Years Ago
cracked lightning returns
spiralling downstairs madly
to break some-poor-thing

very cool

Posted 12 Years Ago
Really like this one!


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the sound felt upon the heartscape

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on May 24, 2011
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trying my hand at haiku...

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jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)
jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

Vancouver, BC, Canada



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Playful and eager to explore new styles of writing, and to hone my skills. i'm reaching a point now where i can write a poem and be able to say that it is something i really like. I'm an avid reader, .. more..

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