You, me

You, me

A Poem by Jennifer
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How can I say to others so many things that I don't really do...

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You, me 
My feet are tired
My head wants to explode 
I'm losing my energy 
I'm losing my voice.
Not a soul notices
Not a person talks
No one even wonders
What is going on my mind?
Yet, too many questions 
Looking for the answers that I can't find
Trying to avoid the questions
Those referring to the past.
You tried to fix all my errors
But you were the first one doing it wrong 
You told me about my composure 
But you were the first one who lost control.
I was built on my own experiences 
While you were trying to build me with yours 
I was trying to learn from my mistakes
But you always blocked my way leaving me without choice. 
How do you expect me to be a better person 
To grow and be more like the person you are
If I wanna grow up my way
And imitate the person I really am.
I may not find the answers 
I may have struggles in my life
I may pretend to be strong 
But that's a mask, you know me very well deep inside.

© 2019 Jennifer


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I once knew a guy, who upon meeting, always asked 'Hey, how are you doing'; then immediately started talking about themselves before I could answer - Your poetic reflection of personal circumstances was a great reminder of a one-sided relationship! Poignant and worth pondering … great write! :-)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jennifer

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the review 🙈 People can be like that, and don’t care about anything more than themse.. read more



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Damn! These persons....what should they be called..annoying?! Then we'll be named arrogant!!
But I guess answering direct on faces....about what irritating you find in them is the best...
Good read☺

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jennifer

3 Years Ago

You made me laugh but u have the reason...thanks for all your reviews!!❤️
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3 Years Ago

I laughed too!😅
Welcome!☺
I once knew a guy, who upon meeting, always asked 'Hey, how are you doing'; then immediately started talking about themselves before I could answer - Your poetic reflection of personal circumstances was a great reminder of a one-sided relationship! Poignant and worth pondering … great write! :-)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jennifer

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the review 🙈 People can be like that, and don’t care about anything more than themse.. read more
Poem amazingly talks about how should a partner or friend or anyone else should help one to grow in his or her life instead nagging them about their mistakes....I wish people understood why it is important to grow!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jennifer

3 Years Ago

I'm glad you like it..You're correct sometimes we ourselves want to experiment things,but how are u.. read more
touching write,profound for many

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 wordman

4 Years Ago

not sorry,concerned and hopeful
Jennifer

4 Years Ago

you're very nice..I'll be fine don't worry, so far I'm.
 wordman

4 Years Ago

you`re welcome

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Added on April 19, 2018
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Tags: #you, #me, #us, #humans, #struggles, #thoughts

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Jennifer
Jennifer

Miami , FL



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