What about...?

What about...?

A Poem by Jennifer

What about...?

What about our dreams?
What about our promises?
Did they just disappeared 
Or you put them aside to prepare a surprise for me.
What about time?
What about distance?
You're not even that far
But you feel so distant to me.
What about my tears?
What about my love?
I seemed so easy to play with it
That you used me as a toy until you got tired of me. 
What about my feelings?
What about my heart?
You think I am a special person 
I'm human, I have feelings and can get hurt too!
Stop saying you love me
Stop saying lies when I already know the truth
If you're that manly why don't you come and show me
Look at my face, and say you're no longer in love with me.

© 2018 Jennifer


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I don't know why sometimes man takes so much effort in saying I Don't Love You.....where effortlessly sometimes collapse life of someone!!
And the 4th line is splendid expression for me!


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jennifer

3 Years Ago

Yeah I feel the same .-. I’m glad you liked that line 😅
this is a sad poem but very expressive and written well

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jennifer

4 Years Ago

Thank you, I guess almost All I write is about sad things 😅😂
sette

4 Years Ago

that is okay

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Added on May 10, 2018
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Tags: #love, #brokenheart, #sad, #lies, #reality, #promises, #feelings, #human, #hurt

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Jennifer
Jennifer

Miami , FL



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A Poem by Jennifer