Feel so lonely !

poem about me basically !

   I feel so lost, 

I feel as there is no hope, 

I feel so lonely, 

I have no friends, 

I have no one, 

All i got is my parents, 

I got my boyfriend and his kids, 

I feel so scared, 

I feel my own weakness, 

I feel my fears, 

I hide my self away from people, 

I cry, 

I scream , 

I yell, 

I say let's ditch this place, 

All hope is lost, 

I have no one, 

I feel so depressed, 

I feel broken down, 

I feel happy, 

As my eyes tremble in tears, 

I feel as all hope is lost forever.

Author's Note

let me know what you think

Reviews

[Confuser]

Jen, this is such a sad poem packed full of emotion, it makes me think this person is so lost and you want to reach out and say evrything will be alright. I really enjoyed it.

[Inda]

This is a great piece because we get a glipse into your state of mind at that particular time, i assume ur not feeling like that now, i personally i'm not a fan of the over repetition of "I" but it was sonething that seemed to fit here. Great piece!

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i think you describe feeling so many people on this planet. cause so many people feel lonely and depressed. it s again very nice write. even is not joyfull poem. there is always hope thing get better . this world is still full of miracles. keep living .

[misha]

A sad poem where your emotions show through every line. Great job!

[jennifer little]

thanks for the review

[misha]

You are welcome!

[Asb]

i can really relate to this rit....as i have no hope these day...good write ...tc

[jennifer little]

thanks for the review

[Girl With A Pen]

This poem is so sad. You really know how to convey the emotion you would like your audience to feel. Great job

[jennifer little]

thanks for the review i appreciate it

[Steph]

This is a really moving and sad poem. I really enjoyed reading it, even though it was so poignant.

[jennifer little]

thanks for the review

[R Smith]

Good punching home your point lines, I know most all those feelings its the life blood of us poets, we turn the negative into the positive with writing, your work here is exceptional, bravo :)

[jennifer little]

thanks for the review

[R Smith]

you're welcome :)

[Botania]

This is a most poignant call, almost a prayer. Be assured God hears our prayers. The Catholic faith teaches us that we are never truly alone. God is with us every second of the day and night. To Him we can give all our problems. He will ease our pain and suffering. His love reins forever in our hearts. Peace.

[jennifer little]

thanks for the review

[Botania]

Most welcome. Cheers.

[Malister Mikey]

I can feel the emotion on this piece and I can assure you that many have felt this way before, Naelei was absolutely correct in pointing out that you have you. I will tell you something that I heard as a young child a quote. "For one who has the love of another loneliness can be overcomed, it only takes one heart to help another." Unknown.

Though I have found problems with this at times I could have a thousand people around me only to feel more lonely than when I choose to be alone. loneliness is a hell like none other and one that everyone will have to fight at least once in their life though remember love beats all else.

[jennifer little]

thanks for the review

[Malister Mikey]

your welcome