A Poem by jennifer little

Vampire poem hope you like t


   Vampire's lurking the night sky,

Looking for souls to steal,

They want your blood,

They want your soul,

They want to steal you away,

Vampire's like to play,

Play head games,

They are very seductive,

They lust upon your deep dark blood,

They thirst upon your blood,

SO if your out at night,

You better watch your back .

© 2014 jennifer little

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jennifer little
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Nice, direct and to the point, a couple errors but overall it's good.

Posted 4 Years Ago

I like this poem :) It fits the theme of vampires very well. I like the special inflection of "SO" in the second to last line. Just a little punctuation error that I may have found. When you say "vampire's" do you mean "vampires"? The way you use the apostrophe makes it so that whatever follows the word is possessive to the noun. But other than that good poem :)

Posted 5 Years Ago

Very vampirc it reminds me of my own book that ive been writing hopefully soon ill be able to show it to everyone

Posted 5 Years Ago

Very vampiric, I enjoyed this it reminds me of my own book im writing

Posted 5 Years Ago

You are a very good writer! Very frightening. Thank you. Dale

Posted 5 Years Ago

You made it as frightening as possible in very few words.
It's an interesting piece.

Posted 5 Years Ago

Interesting poem. Vampires do desire the blood but most of all the live for the hunt. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago

Man...If I find that I left anything in my car tonight...
It will just have to wait until tomorrow!!!

Posted 5 Years Ago

Very creative of the blood sucking vampire and the way he destroys life and never really sets it free Makes another vampire bat out of little old me.

Posted 5 Years Ago

A very seductive vampire poem....

Posted 5 Years Ago

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Added on November 25, 2014
Last Updated on November 25, 2014


jennifer little
jennifer little

Coldwater, MI

hi im jen i am a single mother of a 2 year old baby girl I have some books published already heres the link spread the word i have a blog on www.. more..


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