tears i cried

just a poem i created a second version let me know if you like the first or second better

          

      first version 

                  All the tears i cried, 

                  All the pain i been through, 

                   And sorrows, 

                  Their all washed away, 

                  For the Glory of God, 

                  Healed my broken heart, 

                  He took away the pain, 

                  The suffering, 

                   The sorrows, 

                   And all the regret, 

                   All the hurt, 

                   No more pain 

   second version 

  tears i cried, 

   tears, 

tears everywhere, 

all the pain i've been through, 

all the sorrows, 

their all washed away, 

for the glory of God i am saved, 

he healed my broken heart, 

he took away the pain, 

the suffering is all gone, 

no more regrets, 

all the sorrows are washed away, 

all the regret is faded away, 

all the hurt is gone, 

no more pain, 

for all the tears i cried God has plan for me

Author's Note

poems i write about my past my regret and other things hope everyone enjoys reading my poems and stories also books

Reviews

[R.E. Ray]

A heartfelt poem based on genuine faith, Jennifer. Thank you for sharing in the Cafe.

[TPK Stories]

Hallelujah! Praise God! God is so good! And the who you can truly rely on. Amen.

[T.S. Sky]

Glory be to God. Great poem.

[jennifer little]

thank you for the review

[T.S. Sky]

You're welcome. 🌺

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Not being a fan of god (any god) I saw this as someone gathering strength from faith. It seems faith is more important than the dogma of religion and a gentle faith even in god can heal.

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful and hopeful words dear Jennifer. We must forgive ourselves and allow the tears to wash away our pain. Amazing words and thoughts shared.
Coyote

[genocide]

you must have a lot of pain that god healed for you