I saw Heaven!!!

another dream that goes with all the other ones the two i had had them all three in a row plus lots more things happend in my dream

  Dream I had on 3-5-12

Story or poem can be both.

Created by: Jennifer little

 

   I saw Heaven,

I had a dream,

A dream,

I looked into the clouds; I saw Heaven, and Hell,

I saw my grandma in heaven in a red rob,

I saw everyone,

I see lots of people in Heaven,

They were in church bleachers singing and standing,

I saw many people,

People I knew that was dead,

People I didn’t know,

Then I saw myself in Heaven,

I was walking through,

As everything began to change,

I was in Heaven,

I saw people in Hell that I knew.

What does this mean?

 

The end,

By: Jennifer little

 

 

 

Author's Note

i serusly dont know what this is about really three dreams in a row all together like the same thing seeing jesus and heaven .. well tell me what you think

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

One of your best!

[_]

yes what does that mean :O if i saw people i knew that were in hell i'd be a little shocked and scared but it depends who it is, anyway cool dream :)

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Cool poem, and a cool dream! Thanks for sharing :D

[Maria.F.T]

Miss, though you do not know what this is about, but this is so great you know. I like the way you describe the words on your mind with a poem, Miss :)

[Andrea]

this is really good. I love the last line.

[Thea]

Wow...Your dreams are somewhat strange...Anyway, nice write...
:)))

[Coyote Poetry]

This could be a very good dream. To see heaven and hell in the same dream allow the mind to know what is the right and wrong road of life to be on. Thank you for sharing your dreams and thoughts. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Evelyn Storm]

Very touching.

[Careless Whispers ._.]

It's a sign
Really lovely

[I LUV 1DIRECTION]

really... well it was just fantastic!