**Lifes Nectar**

**Lifes Nectar**

A Poem by Debra Wedin
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~about a butterfly~

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Flowing through the air.. Feeling the cool breeze.. Nectar sweet and milky, is the anticipation.. Slowly and softly, placing onto -the peddle of gold. Consuming and filling up, with the taste of life. <3 Written by: Debra Wedin 02/26/13

© 2013 Debra Wedin


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This is a wonderful movie on a lovely butterfly flitting from flower to flower in a cool breeze.
Wonderful write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debra Wedin

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much!!!
:-)
zainul

11 Years Ago

You are most welcome :-)
short, but sweet, i enjoyed reading this, i can sense the tension, from something building up while reading it. good choice of language and images.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debra Wedin

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much. It's refreshing to have people
understand what this means!
Azriel

11 Years Ago

you're welcome and it really is a good piece
Dear Debra

Anticipation sometimes is better than the act itself?

Charming short piece


James

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debra Wedin

11 Years Ago

Thank you so very much!!!

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Added on April 6, 2013
Last Updated on April 6, 2013
Tags: animals, insects

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Debra Wedin
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Doing the best I can, with what I have. I have two wonderful children. I have the most wonderful fiance. I love writing and love to learn more about it. more..

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A Poem by Debra Wedin



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