Maya

Maya

A Poem by jesserose99
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my niece's poem

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She's a dancing on the TV

She's my little nieceee

when they were handing out cute

they went and gave her a suit


a whip gave her her smarts

reading books she just starts

she's a chet artiste

up on the marquis


she's a little yoda

wise before her quota


She's my little niece

she really gives me peace


of mind!!

© 2015 jesserose99


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Nice tribute to your niece. Kids are a wonder. I spent many years working as a Speech Therapist in public schools. Children from preschool to high school. They never failed to surprise me.

Unfortunately they grow up into the dreaded species, adults. Science will have to find a cure for that one day.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jesserose99

3 Years Ago

I know, I would like her to stay 6 with that little lost tooth in the front for ever!!



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Awwww! Such a sweet gift for her....She will be proud of you reading this when she will grow up.....What a touching and affectionate poetry.....God bless her and i pray that your whole family have a lovely christmas this year and many more to come....

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jesserose99

3 Years Ago

thank you Dhiman, I know we will, and you too!
A wonderful poem for your niece. The poem was a pleasure to read and left me with a smile. A perfect ending for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your love for your niece is evident. Bravo. We needier families who love each other. I wish my children had such loving support!
One typo: "she really *gives* me peace".
Again, you present a great deal of meaning with a light mood.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jesserose99

3 Years Ago

thank you for that...typo fixed..children were never in my cards with this nerve condition, so she i.. read more
 David Scott

3 Years Ago

You can feel proud of yourself for choosing to live them so. Many turn inward to pity and resentment.. read more
jesserose99

3 Years Ago

they better, because there going to get it!
Aww, sounds like a little cutie...and I bet youre her favourite aunt :)
A beautiful tribute that would make a wonderful 21st or wedding day gift to her. I held on to my neighbours daughters paintings and letters to santa and gave her some of those framed as a wedding present. She loved it :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jesserose99

3 Years Ago

I was just telling Robert, she isn't going to grow up...lol
alifeacoustic

3 Years Ago

Aww, I bet she goes ahead and very selfishly grows up :)
Nice tribute to your niece. Kids are a wonder. I spent many years working as a Speech Therapist in public schools. Children from preschool to high school. They never failed to surprise me.

Unfortunately they grow up into the dreaded species, adults. Science will have to find a cure for that one day.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jesserose99

3 Years Ago

I know, I would like her to stay 6 with that little lost tooth in the front for ever!!
they are our crowns ! a sweet tribute

Posted 3 Years Ago


jesserose99

3 Years Ago

thanks!! you are exactly right!!
elwood blues

3 Years Ago

my pleasure
Gotta love kids. It's only a matter of month's until I'll have a little niece or nephew. I'm very excited.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jesserose99

3 Years Ago

oh, Clifford, it's a blessing you will never be able to describe. I don't have kids, and they are t.. read more

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jesserose99
jesserose99

lakewood, CO



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I am a tarot reader and numerologist, who loves to write poetry. I also write songs and love to sing and play guitar. I love art too, so clearly I just have a passion for creativity. Also love my dog.. more..

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