Maya

my niece's poem

She's a dancing on the TV

She's my little nieceee

when they were handing out cute

they went and gave her a suit

a whip gave her her smarts

reading books she just starts

she's a chet artiste

up on the marquis

she's a little yoda

wise before her quota

She's my little niece

she really gives me peace

of mind!!

Reviews

[Robert Parlange]

Nice tribute to your niece. Kids are a wonder. I spent many years working as a Speech Therapist in public schools. Children from preschool to high school. They never failed to surprise me.

Unfortunately they grow up into the dreaded species, adults. Science will have to find a cure for that one day.

[jesserose99]

I know, I would like her to stay 6 with that little lost tooth in the front for ever!!

[Inject Positivity]

Awwww! Such a sweet gift for her....She will be proud of you reading this when she will grow up.....What a touching and affectionate poetry.....God bless her and i pray that your whole family have a lovely christmas this year and many more to come....

[jesserose99]

thank you Dhiman, I know we will, and you too!

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem for your niece. The poem was a pleasure to read and left me with a smile. A perfect ending for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[David Scott]

Your love for your niece is evident. Bravo. We needier families who love each other. I wish my children had such loving support!
One typo: "she really *gives* me peace".
Again, you present a great deal of meaning with a light mood.

[jesserose99]

thank you for that...typo fixed..children were never in my cards with this nerve condition, so she is like my niece and nephew are kids for me. they are the loves of my life.

[David Scott]

You can feel proud of yourself for choosing to live them so. Many turn inward to pity and resentment.
You deserve a hug! I'm sure those little ones have many to spare.

[jesserose99]

they better, because there going to get it!

[alifeacoustic]

Aww, sounds like a little cutie...and I bet youre her favourite aunt :)
A beautiful tribute that would make a wonderful 21st or wedding day gift to her. I held on to my neighbours daughters paintings and letters to santa and gave her some of those framed as a wedding present. She loved it :)

[jesserose99]

I was just telling Robert, she isn't going to grow up...lol

[alifeacoustic]

Aww, I bet she goes ahead and very selfishly grows up :)

[elwood blues]

they are our crowns ! a sweet tribute

[jesserose99]

thanks!! you are exactly right!!

[elwood blues]

my pleasure

[Jacob Clifford]

Gotta love kids. It's only a matter of month's until I'll have a little niece or nephew. I'm very excited.

[jesserose99]

oh, Clifford, it's a blessing you will never be able to describe. I don't have kids, and they are the loves of my life!!