The Birth

The Birth

A Poem by Joel Paulin Mendoza
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This is a metaphysical poem about how our thinking can lead to different consequences.

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One thought of mind.

 

Two sides emerged

Twice the complexities surfaced

 

Three subthemes were born

Thrice the arguments ascend

Third rules observed

 

Four would now compete

A square to hold each other’s feat

Quads would be a difficult pick

Fourth round seemed a tiring battle

 

One thought to ponder.

 

See how it give birth to ideas

Feel the intricacies of concepts

 

Be careful.

 

 

© 2015 Joel Paulin Mendoza


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I like your thoughts and logic.
"See how it give birth to ideas
Feel the intricacies of concepts"
The intricacies of concept is needed to open mind and possibilities. Nice flow of thoughts led to very nice ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote




Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I like your thoughts and logic.
"See how it give birth to ideas
Feel the intricacies of concepts"
The intricacies of concept is needed to open mind and possibilities. Nice flow of thoughts led to very nice ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote




Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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