Just Live

Just Live

A Poem by Johee Poetry

Everyone goes through battles.
As a child, as a teen and even as you grow old.
Struggle is just another part of life.
See the good of every bad.
Because every bad will only be for a moment.
I light a candle for every broken child that has to be in hospitals every other day.
For every man that has no choice but to be brave.
For every woman that has to go through all the emotions.
If only there was a magical potion to cure it all.
We cannot let another one of us fall.
So here we are uniting for one great cause.
Make peace with others not wars.
Put yourself in other people's shoes.
You might not have any clue of what they've gone through.
Live for every sweet moment.
For every reason and situation is sent.

© 2011 Johee Poetry


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Johee Poetry,

Just Live is a beautiful representation of change and perserverance.

Everyone does go through battles... we should ban together in a united front and give eachother a chance to shine.

Step aside and put your feet in their shoes, see what they go through. Steps small for some are huge for others - it is never the same across the board.

I enjoyed this write and see it as a diamond in the rough, it shines hope and change, unity, and bonding yet teaches humility and humanity.

Great job if everyone believed this way we would be one-step closer to world peace.

Thank you for sharing,

Legacy

I believe this would be a great submission for Enlightenment contest in the group Poetic Infusion Society.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Walk in someone shoes , empathy is a gift . Good write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


nice poetry

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Johee Poetry,

Just Live is a beautiful representation of change and perserverance.

Everyone does go through battles... we should ban together in a united front and give eachother a chance to shine.

Step aside and put your feet in their shoes, see what they go through. Steps small for some are huge for others - it is never the same across the board.

I enjoyed this write and see it as a diamond in the rough, it shines hope and change, unity, and bonding yet teaches humility and humanity.

Great job if everyone believed this way we would be one-step closer to world peace.

Thank you for sharing,

Legacy

I believe this would be a great submission for Enlightenment contest in the group Poetic Infusion Society.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Johee Poetry
Johee Poetry

Miami, FL



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Hello, my name is Johee and I am 25 years old. I'm currently living in Miami Florida I have been writing poetry for more than 10 years. please tell me what you think of my work. dont hesitate .. more..

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