Friend? Foe?

Friend? Foe?

A Poem by johnny
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This one is bad.

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 You say you’re my best friend,

You say it like it means nothing at all.

But I’m sick of lying,

You’re not my friend.

You never were and never will be,

You barely even know me.

I know you think you know me perfectly,

But can’t you see,

That I barely even know me anymore?

 

Do you think that maybe I smile or laugh,

That it is actually fake?
Do you know how much I cry?

Or that I’m living a lie?

Do you know that sometimes when I’m talking,

I really feel like screaming?

Do you see the darker side of me,

Or even the real true me?

I can answer that for you.

No, you don’t!

© 2009 johnny


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wow, much agression.
i enjoy your poetry you have a way with words...

-Faith♥

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice.
I feel this way a lot.
Points for being relative to the reader.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Seems directed at someone personally. lol I enjoyed the emotion you gave, really powerful without being over bearing. Nice job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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