Breathtaking

I wrote this haiku about how gorgeous mornings are at the ocean. I think it's like the ocean completes with the sky over which is more beautiful, but it all is. Hope you enjoy. :)

Seashells like porcelain

Glimmer through transient tides

Capturing dawns breath

Reviews

[Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAutho..]

Very nice, Jolie! :)

[Jolie Blossom]

Thank you, friend!!! I am becoming more and more favorable to haiku's... Something about them makes me happy. :)

[Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor]

Happy is as happy does... and, life is like a box of chocolates - heard that somewhere too. :)

[Jolie Blossom]

That Gump... what a guy :)