True Ecstasy

True Ecstasy

A Poem by That_Guy
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Inspired by my Muse

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You’ve never truly known strength,
Until the day I held you tight.
No safe haven as warm or shielding,
As when you’re wrapped securely in my arms.

Every detail, every inch of your fair skin,
Explored by my rough yet gentle hands.
Our bodies entwined and minds connected
New smells, new tastes, true ecstasy.

Our paths collide on a journey with the same destination,
Our hearts will lead as our bodies eagerly follow.
My gaze never breaks from yours as we reach the pinnacle,
Pulse quickens, sweat glistens, hushed screams echo.

I’ve never truly seen beauty,
Until the day I woke next to you.
Never so at peace or complete,
As when you’re wrapped securely in my arms.

© 2012 That_Guy


Author's Note

That_Guy
Something a bit more mature but still my sappy self, hopeless romantic heh

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this poem is so passionate and beautiful! Very well written! Great job!

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Beautifully passionate...really enjoyed :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


i like this ! (:

Posted 8 Years Ago


That_Guy

8 Years Ago

Awesome ;) thanks haha
rihanna

8 Years Ago

npp :D
Love it!! I love the eroticism.....

Posted 8 Years Ago


That_Guy

8 Years Ago

Smurf Yeah!
I change my mind about the review--this is wonderful! :) Nice photo along with it, too ;)

Posted 8 Years Ago


That_Guy

8 Years Ago

haha it's about time ;) I'm a strong enough person that I"m not afraid to show my softer side haha... read more
Not so sappy but all the more romantic; it isn't my preferred genre of poetry but nonetheless, I enjoyed the calm essence to your lines.

Posted 8 Years Ago


That_Guy

8 Years Ago

I appreciate that, thank you
Oh god, You remind me of someone.
The Protection that you offer and the happiness it gives you providing it in this piece is utterly beautiful.
It just took me down memory lane and back I relate too much.
Perfectly written beautifully described, moved me, full credit.

-JiDonnelly'

Posted 8 Years Ago


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That_Guy

8 Years Ago

hope that's not a bad thing, at least not to much.
I welcome that position with open arms, or.. read more
The title caught my attention. I really like the nice and gentle act of strength that is so loving, in the first stanza. Such a loving write with loving and beautiful emotions and imagery of descriptions that are such beauty... this poem flows so nicely. Really a nice write, enjoyed.

Posted 8 Years Ago


That_Guy

8 Years Ago

I'm glad you liked it. I hope the poem lived up the title hype heh. Strength is so versatile to me a.. read more

Yep....you are a romantic. I understand that afterall...

I liked this! Good accompanying photo too.

Posted 8 Years Ago


That_Guy

8 Years Ago

I'm a pretty passionate guy in most aspects of my life.

Thank you, I appreciate it ver.. read more
soliloquy

8 Years Ago

No problem....you are a good addition to this sometimes crazy site....
i love it. not sappy at all. very romantic. i love to wake up in big huge arms :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Karen666

8 Years Ago

Lol god are we 13 years old again.
That_Girl

8 Years Ago

lol again?? I never stopped being 13 haha
Michael Thrower

8 Years Ago

I always thought people stopped aging at 13.

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Added on August 25, 2012
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Tags: ecstasy, love, strength, sex, passion, heart, beauty, journey, safe

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That_Guy

Anza, CA



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First off I'm 23 years old. I'm a lover and a fighter. I've competed in various martial arts and I consider myself a rather opposing figure. On the outside you see tattoos, muscles and scars but what .. more..

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