The Night is Upon Us

There's a Full Moon tonight, be careful

I feel it rising over the cliff,

The hair on my neck standing stiff.

The cycle once again complete,

The Full Moon I anxiously greet.

Now empowered I'm on the prowl,

Deep from my chest you hear my growl.

Bright strong eyes meet your gaze,

You're lost and mine now stuck in my maze.

Run and scream but it will do you no good,

you turn around but only grass is where I once stood.

Confused and scared you search for me,

Then my breath you feel from up in the tree.

You've no where to go and no where to hide,

For me it's been fun, an exhilarating ride,

But the time has come for the hunt to end,

This is the night I will ascend.

Reviews

[Sethnicity]

Very nice.... that guy is quite the predator!
only 1 critique:
"this is the night I will descend".. but that's just where I would have gone with it...
Other wise amazing write it deserves it's place at the top of your list.

Favorite line:
"Now empowered I'm on the prowl,
Deep from my chest you hear my growl.
Bright strong eyes meet your gaze,
You're lost and mine now stuck in my maze."

I love the thrill of the HUNT! :)

[Roe]

Nice write you captured me in this.

[That_Guy]

You guessed right

[Marie]

Oh yes, you do have to be careful on a full moon might. Is the predator a vampire or a wherewolf? I'm guessing wherewolf...

[Angelic Surrender]

Hawooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Nice poem ;)

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Felt a rhythm in your words. Beautifully written to read and listen in silence.