Protector

Protector

A Poem by Canicus

having a down day
frown upon your face
anxiety taking it's toll
making your heart race

can't keep your concentration
mind is scattered
and being pulled in every direction
on the window thoughts splattered

so much happening
all at once, it's a lot to take
and you're trying to be strong
can I help you smile when you wake

help you get through this life
with real, true happiness
not the kind people pretend
that turn them into a mess

I want to be your crying shoulder
the person you know you can lean on
I want to be your protector
so please can I help you from now on 

© 2013 Canicus


Author's Note

Canicus
I don't really like this one either, but here it is.

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This has such a strong and motivational message :) It is always wonderful to be able to help people out of their down moods and there's hope for everyone, even if they just have a bad day. A bad day shouldn't be a reason for us to end our entire lives, good days will eventually come...bad days are just necessary in order to move forward to experience the new.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Realy sweet. Its amazing and verry cute

Posted 6 Years Ago


Very nice!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Short n' sweet. I enjoyed it and how it wasn't choppy during any line I read. Good work matching the title to the writing and making sure that it fit the poem correctly.
I also like how you didn't confide in 11 letter words and such, and you mixed the most basic flavors of writing and still made a product that beats some of the ones that are chock full of 'fancy' words. This was a piece that you should be proud of. c:


Posted 7 Years Ago


In reply to your author's note, how can you not like this one?
I love it.
Awesome write, I enjoyed each part and the flow. The thought and meaning of being there for someone as a protector is a nice feeling and needed/wanted by many. I think you touched on emotions very well in this poem. The simple title fits just perfectly to the poem. Really enjoyed.

Posted 7 Years Ago


A space that leads to those wanted, a well written piece.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like this a lot, especially since this is me like everyday.

Writing keeps the dream alive
~V~

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like this. This is how I feel right now.

Posted 7 Years Ago


i rlly like this.
be my crying shoulder (i jus feel so weird at the moment, all upset, & my head is spinning, this feeling drives me insane.)


Posted 7 Years Ago



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