Full speed ahead

Full speed ahead

A Poem by Canicus

Time
It's going way to fast
I can never
seem to make it last

It's happening
all too soon
I just want
to stay in my cocoon

This is
a lot to take on
and the picture
 is poorly drawn

Just got comfy
in my own
now moving
to a path not yet shown

I'm not ready
to go on un-led
but I guess
full speed ahead

© 2013 Canicus


Author's Note

Canicus
I'm getting back into it.
enjoy

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The rhyme flows realy well. It is very true and deep

Posted 6 Years Ago


I really like this and it speaks truth about time that's for sure, it's realistic and relatable too. Time does seem to go by really fast sometimes.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Makes me think of how people are around the holidays. Like a million things to do but not enough time to do it. Great poem really well written

Posted 6 Years Ago


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You either beat time or time beats you...Bravo

Posted 6 Years Ago


I like it. Great flow with understandable feelings. Well done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


It's simplistic, yet very elaborate. Wonderful job :)

Posted 6 Years Ago



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