desire

a poem of love I themed of fire

It all started with
one little spark
that caused a fire
in my heart once so dark

My heart
caught a blaze
talking to you always
put me in a daze

one flame lit up my heart
so bright
I can't see anything
without that light

It burns
throughout my heart
how much of it is damaged?
not one part

my friendship with you
caught on fire
now you are
my one true desire

Author's Note

I didn't know if it was ablaze or a blaze so please ignore that, but other than that please tell me what you thought

Reviews

[Day Dreamer]

I loved it mainly because my book character, Maria, has fire as her element. It's wonderful Joshua. Keep writing! :) *poke* (hehe...)

[<3Lil.Bit(:]

Another good poem. This kind of reminds me of A Burning Candle, that one poem of mine that you reviewed.

~Skulli

[...]

Excellent expression, and good penning.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Trusted, sweet and full of emotion and passion, a mere drop but the honesty I love. wel done

[EmeraldFacet]

I really like the vivid honesty of this piece. I also have a poem titled Desire, and I can say that your poem is the ying to my yang :-)

Nice!

[TJ]

It's ablaze the way you used it.
Awesome poem, your imagery was wonderful and you used it to show us how truly hard and fast you fell for this person who was once your friend.
Amazing