My Everything!

My Everything!

A Poem by JustWantLove

..that's all he wrote..


( spent, all worth..)

I want to thank you,
For living inside of me;
I want to thank you,
For leading me to see;
I'm alive to thank you,
For all you've made me be,
I dream to thank you,
For letting me be free.
I sing to thank you,
For being next to me,
I cry to tell you,
For gazing in my soul,
I want to show you,
For never letting go.
I'm here to show you,
You're air that I do breathe,
I'm born to know you,
To love you and to cease,
Just know: I love you,
You're Ecstasy to me,
Aroma of all life:
I'm waiting on my knee!


© 2010 JustWantLove

Author's Note

It is, what it is!

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Fierce flow of emotions here! Really loving, open and caring .. this was a huge tribute to another of very, very high appeal. There's so many great lines in such a short, simple writing that represent so much .. I sure hope that whomever it's written for sees and feels the depth of such quality.. words to move mountains!

Posted 14 Years Ago

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This was beautiful...thank you for sharing this.


Posted 13 Years Ago

He is obsessed with her, some people can make us feel like this, and then that's the true best love ever. wonderful poetry.

Posted 13 Years Ago

I just have luck to read the best pieces on this site. This one really captures you as you read it. It's simply written, yet it tells so much. Just as I like it :)

Posted 14 Years Ago

And what it is, is...well, amazing. (I use that word a lot) Its fluid and touches the heart in a very good way. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 14 Years Ago

For whom was this poem written if I may ask

Posted 14 Years Ago

Another splendid poem from you with highly passionate appeal. This one could very well be a spiritual write. Kudos!

Posted 14 Years Ago

You write with the exuberance of fireworks! The words are explosive and yet tightly contained within the stricture of form. I almost feel as if I've opened a gift box, small within my hands; and yet, when opened, it bursts into being as though a blossom of delight. You are like E. E. Cummings, Lord Byron, and Percy Bysshe Shelley combined.

Linda Marie

Posted 14 Years Ago

Nice work.
your poems always look nice too.

Posted 14 Years Ago

Thank you for such genuine and touching words.

Posted 14 Years Ago

Just so beautiful, what else can I say, this beauty speaks for itself.
Thanks for sharing these lovely thoughts in a amazing poem!

Still can't believe you are leaving us!!! You'll be sorely missed poet.

Kind regards

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on January 27, 2010
Last Updated on January 27, 2010



*bleep*, IL

* You will either love me, or hate me. Love, being the cataclysmic, overwhelming abundance of passion, hope and enduring. I am not for the fain of heart. Real, daring, blunt .. human. I a.. more..


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