My Everything!

My Everything!

A Poem by JustWantLove
"

..that's all he wrote..

"

(..life spent, all worth..)

I want to thank you,
For living inside of me;
I want to thank you,
For leading me to see;
I'm alive to thank you,
For all you've made me be,
I dream to thank you,
For letting me be free.
I sing to thank you,
For being next to me,
I cry to tell you,
For gazing in my soul,
I want to show you,
For never letting go.
I'm here to show you,
You're air that I do breathe,
I'm born to know you,
To love you and to cease,
Just know: I love you,
You're Ecstasy to me,
Aroma of all life:
I'm waiting on my knee!


(..s.c..)

© 2010 JustWantLove


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JustWantLove
It is, what it is!

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Fierce flow of emotions here! Really loving, open and caring .. this was a huge tribute to another of very, very high appeal. There's so many great lines in such a short, simple writing that represent so much .. I sure hope that whomever it's written for sees and feels the depth of such quality.. words to move mountains!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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This was beautiful...thank you for sharing this.

xxoxx

Posted 9 Years Ago


He is obsessed with her, some people can make us feel like this, and then that's the true best love ever. wonderful poetry.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I just have luck to read the best pieces on this site. This one really captures you as you read it. It's simply written, yet it tells so much. Just as I like it :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


And what it is, is...well, amazing. (I use that word a lot) Its fluid and touches the heart in a very good way. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


For whom was this poem written if I may ask

Posted 9 Years Ago


Another splendid poem from you with highly passionate appeal. This one could very well be a spiritual write. Kudos!

Posted 9 Years Ago


You write with the exuberance of fireworks! The words are explosive and yet tightly contained within the stricture of form. I almost feel as if I've opened a gift box, small within my hands; and yet, when opened, it bursts into being as though a blossom of delight. You are like E. E. Cummings, Lord Byron, and Percy Bysshe Shelley combined.

Linda Marie

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nice work.
your poems always look nice too.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Thank you for such genuine and touching words.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Just so beautiful, what else can I say, this beauty speaks for itself.
Thanks for sharing these lovely thoughts in a amazing poem!

Still can't believe you are leaving us!!! You'll be sorely missed poet.

Kind regards
Helena

Posted 9 Years Ago



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*bleep*, IL



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* You will either love me, or hate me. Love, being the cataclysmic, overwhelming abundance of passion, hope and enduring. I am not for the fain of heart. Real, daring, blunt .. human. I am..in a.. more..

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