My Everything!

My Everything!

A Poem by JustWantLove
"

..that's all he wrote..

"

(..life spent, all worth..)

I want to thank you,
For living inside of me;
I want to thank you,
For leading me to see;
I'm alive to thank you,
For all you've made me be,
I dream to thank you,
For letting me be free.
I sing to thank you,
For being next to me,
I cry to tell you,
For gazing in my soul,
I want to show you,
For never letting go.
I'm here to show you,
You're air that I do breathe,
I'm born to know you,
To love you and to cease,
Just know: I love you,
You're Ecstasy to me,
Aroma of all life:
I'm waiting on my knee!


(..s.c..)

© 2010 JustWantLove


Author's Note

JustWantLove
It is, what it is!

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

Fierce flow of emotions here! Really loving, open and caring .. this was a huge tribute to another of very, very high appeal. There's so many great lines in such a short, simple writing that represent so much .. I sure hope that whomever it's written for sees and feels the depth of such quality.. words to move mountains!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

Wow!
This is great, it's emotional and, truthful I guess. I don't know how to explain but it's great!

Posted 10 Years Ago


What an amazing poem, such powerful, true love felt throughout. You're ability to express your emotion like this is remarkable.

Posted 10 Years Ago


You can tell this is such a heartfelt piece. It is beautiful and romantic. I loved it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i loved this poem. I found it very uplifting, positive and slightly 'religious' in a way too. It evoked images of a 'supreme force or being' in me. The verses flowed perfectly and i felt it inside...great work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


A beautiful and heartfelt piece. You really are a true romantic and every poem you write is true to who you are. Never stop expressing yourself.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Its so hard to read this and not think its all been pinned on someone already, but I do understand that fierceness of fire that can seemingly spark up out of nowhere and send the soul into a frenzy of sorts of search and rescue. This is a read that appears almost as if lives really depend on a little bit of discovery.
Intense is the best way to sum up a lot of your work, convincing would be the other.

pen on sir

Posted 10 Years Ago


It is beautiful. Sometime we must tell the ones we love they are our life. A excellent poem. Description was very good.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


and it is...amazing :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is very well written such a wonderful write full of emotion.

Posted 10 Years Ago


beautfiul and full of emotions. wonderful

Posted 10 Years Ago



Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

1196 Views
28 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 1 Library
Added on January 27, 2010
Last Updated on January 27, 2010

Author

JustWantLove
JustWantLove

*bleep*, IL



About
* You will either love me, or hate me. Love, being the cataclysmic, overwhelming abundance of passion, hope and enduring. I am not for the fain of heart. Real, daring, blunt .. human. I am..in a.. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Don't Ask Don't Ask

A Poem by Erin Lee