" Ward "

Written in 2003. Maclane Hospital, Belmont Mass.

Maybe this is where I should be. 

I don't want to exist in your world. 

Give up hope, please let me fade away.

Forgotten in my locked room.

Holding a Strange desire to stay.

Yet wanting out so desperately.

Forever feeling misunderstood.

Thoughts that seem twisted to others.

Still not to me...

                         JAM

Author's Note

Honest Opinions please!!!

Reviews

[judith106]

Thank you both for the reviews. I haven't been active on this site for awhile

[scripted]

i love this to be completely honest it was a great piece nice job.... yours truely

[sarah kaitlin]

very eerie and to the point, yet still mysterious. i love how it ends on an ellipsis, gives it a feeling of uncertainty.