My Devil Bhai

My Devil Bhai

A Poem by ayesha gupta
"

dedicated to my little brother

"
He is two-feet shorter,
and eight years younger,
but don't underestimate him by his size,
but he is not an innocent kid,
He is my devil bhai!

Doremon, pokemon,
are his favorites,
he can watch them all the time,
singing the cartoon songs,
don't go on his cute looks,
He is my devil bhai.

Action movies, he loves,
and practise the fights with me, its his passtime.
He hits so hard..ouch! if i deny,
you will find him practising with vases.
He is my action-lover devil bhai.

He makes fun of me,
saying i am fatso,
and never calls me didi.
Most-of-time irritating, but i love him.
He is my lovely devil bhai.

© 2014 ayesha gupta


Author's Note

ayesha gupta
bhai means brother,
and didi means elder sister.
hope you like it. :) rate, review , share.

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He makes fun of me,
saying i am fatso,
and never calls me didi.
Most-of-time irritating, but i love him.
He is my lovely devil bhai

I can understand it very well beacause my devil sister is with me, for cry all the time like a dayan. But she is very nice. A very beautiful poetry as I can see your Devil bhai.....

Posted 9 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

9 Years Ago

:-D thanks for review
Haha so awesome Ayesha! I wrote something similar on my sis as well.
This is so cute... Brotherly truths .. They can be a Handful but they sure can love great too

Posted 9 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

9 Years Ago

yep. :-) thanks for review.
I enjoyed the poem. Gave life and spirit to your wild brother. Young brothers can be a handful. I like the way you described him. A very entertaining poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem for your brother.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

9 Years Ago

thanks for review. :-)
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
its very cute........i loved it....

Posted 9 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

9 Years Ago

thanks kuldeep.
made me smile. an entertaining and amusing poem! well written.

Posted 9 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

9 Years Ago

thanks for review. :-)
Its cute, I am 9 year younger to my sister, and we still miss the days of our childhood which were so good, Ayesha you reminded me all those days, thankyou for writing a lovely poem :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

9 Years Ago

thanks for an awesome review ,sir. :))

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Added on November 25, 2014
Last Updated on November 25, 2014
Tags: brother, devil, doremon, pokemon, funny

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ayesha gupta
ayesha gupta

patna , bihar, patna, India



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Hi everyone. I m writing here as Ayesha Gupta (my pen-name). I m 18yr old. I m here to learn writing and to be friends with you all. I try to write which not neccessarily be 10/10 in your views, but i.. more..

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