"Why?"

You make all these promises
But then go and break them
You demand your respect
But don't ever give it
You say I'm your son
But don't treat me as such
You give your love to him
But don't give any to me
You gave birth young
But didn't want me at all
You tell me you love me
But then you neglect me
I will give you my love
All I want is love back

Reviews

[Eloise]

Wow, that is both powerful and heartbreaking. The structure is wonderful and it flows smoothly. I have no complaints, I hope that you find love from someone who is able to see how talented and caring you are.
-Eloise

[Butterflymom]

This was a very powerful, emotional, and heartfelt piece........well done!

[Danny W]

Sad, but from the heart. Hopefully this will resolve itself.

[mae-mae<3]

OMG IT'S YOU!!!! As always this poem is very heart-touching and I love it! Btw I'm the girl from yahoo...

[mae-mae<3]

OMG IT'S YOU!!!! As always this poem is very heart-touching and I love it! Btw I'm the girl from yahoo...