To my love

To my love

A Story by Katarzyna Slade

To my love,
Like a siren you call me and like the ship I crash
Like a god I worship you, you surround me like a rash.
Like an angel you guide me, I always look to you,
Like a candle you light the room, show me safe passage
And guide me through.
Just like you pure heart, my feelings are true.
I watch you from afar,
Loving you, admiring you
And not knowingly you've stolen my heart.
My feelings aren't illusions or a chemical imbalance,
They run deep, strong and heavy with valence.
And with innocence my heart follows you longingly
For I am the invisible girl, the one you never see.
I hide behind my smiles, secretly aching,
Over time, day by day,
My heart quietly, painfully breaking.
For I know you belong to another.
You kiss her sweetly and look at her the way I would wish,
And yet I tell these lies because she is a deserving lover.
I keep my thoughts at bay for you I endure this suffer.
I tell you untruths, for in her heart you belong,
And in return she own's you,
Like birds own the morning song.
Therefore I sit by idle, quiet never declaring my love,
For I know you receive from another, that your happy.
And for me, That's enough.
From the girl, you'll never know.
Take care, you'r secret love.

© 2012 Katarzyna Slade


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This is absolutely beautiful, so full of emotions! It is so hard to be able to love someone and let them be with another, this is a brilliant piece!

Posted 9 Years Ago


reading this reduced me to something i wanted to forbid myself to experience. i think it is because it touched me so deeply and i loved how you wrote this. it sets a stage that welcomes much in way of delight and wonder.

Posted 9 Years Ago


First off let me say "woohoo new word :)" After looking up what valence means I think it fits perfectly too.
Favorite line/s:

"And in return she own's you,
Like birds own the morning song."

So perfectly describes it all, I love that line.
The whole piece drips with emotion and I liked the way it flowed when I said it out loud.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Beautiful and sorrowful. wonderful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Those secret love's are the secrets we want to shout out loud. But we can't. I like the way you told the story in this poem. A strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Katarzyna Slade
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