return

see title

Who will return to the home

The place where we all start

Or will we let our hearts roam

And simply give into the art,

Many shall stand and say

"I'd rather take my own way"

And struggel all the same

Resisting to feel the pain

Untill it is to much to bare

And will over-shoot it by a hare

Slowly tumbling down their throne

Untill they hit rock bottem, and go home

Author's Note

please disregard the spelling

Reviews

[kamikazebuterfli]

very, very good!!!!

[Celtic Cat]

This is so great. My horoscope actually told me to not neglect home yesterday, so I guess I'll take this as another hint!! My dad used to always tell me "the only real friends you have is family" and though in my experience I have found that my friends become like family, still, there's no place like home.

Excellent piece!

On second read I feel a different sense of home, a more universal one, perhaps even spiritual. No matter your intent, this piece is a gem!! A good moral story for all to read!! Much love~~