Jesus Loves The Little Children

Jesus Loves The Little Children

A Poem by kayluhfayy11
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This is the song that i wrote for my youth group praise band for a contest:)

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Jesus loves the little children.

He wants them all to come to him.

What are we doing?

We're losing a generation, a people, a nation.

Those little eyes are seeing.

Those little ears are hearing.

Those little wheels are turning.

And those little hands are reaching for something more than this world is offering.

Let's give 'em hope.

Let's give 'em love.

Let's give 'em something to believe in.

Let's give 'em more.

This time we're offered is slippin' through our fingers.

Can't waste this power we're given.

Let's use our lives for something better.

Let's help out.

Let's hit the ground runnin'.

Let's catch the world by surprise.

I want to change the path these little kids are destined for.

I want to make them a brighter future.

Let's show 'em how to wish.

Let's show 'em how to dream.

Let's show 'em how to be everything they were made to be.

© 2009 kayluhfayy11


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kayluhfayy11
tell me whatcha think and be honest:)

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My favorite part was when you say "Let's hit the ground runnin'...." and the rest after that. I think it's cool that this is a song, sounds like something I'd want to hear. This poem is so full of hope...like the other commenters have written. Really, I like it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the poem and its cool

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the poem. The flow and the story is very good. Jesus loved the children. Watching this world with our free will must be breaking his heart. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent. Full of hope and promise. I strongly agree with the message this piece sends across. Truly amazing. Keep it up =]

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 17, 2009

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