Breathe

A fictional poem about a lover's death.

Breathe,

D****t why won't you breathe?

Don't let death drag you into eternal sleep.

Please just fight,

Stay here with me.

Please just breathe.

Breathe,

You can't leave me alone.

Please,

Please,

Breathe for me. 

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

Amazing yet simple poem you have put together here, I love how this expresses the remorse one feels when his/her lover has met their end

[Alex Vidmar]

Love it!