Background Music

Soft music playing in the background

the rustle of the sheets.

sweet smell of vanilla mixed with cinnamon

a small sigh coming forth combined with a groan

the sheets covered in sweat.

Sweet sighs of relieft overbearing the music

The satin sheets wet with tears

Our faces red and excited from ectasy

the smooth touch of your hand on my face

the sweet smile of your face

Reviews

[kewlbluetiger]

This poem was so sensual and comforting. You did a fantastic job teasing senses like sweets smell and feeling. Nice to have a charming lover as you so well described here.

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this has a soft and sentimental feel.nice work

[Matthew Kult]

Classy but sexy. Great imagery. Good flow. Now I need to take a nice cold shower. Much thanks for that. Great Job

[Steve]

This sounds very nice......

well done. I like how your nicely summarized this scene.

[SharkBite]

I liked this a lot. Your words make it easy to imagine the scene. Excellent work!

[Creepy Swine Guy]

I like the subtlety of this poem. I notice an inconsistency about how you capitalize that is mildly nagging but not seriously damaging to the quality of the words and images.

You've done good work.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I love this, so simple and yet so powerfully romantic brining visual delight to the imagination.

[jose]

nice poem i like it very nice except 1 spelling mistake, i think ectasy is misspelled other than that its good