You regret the day...

You regret the day...

A Poem by Mickey

you regret the day
you let her go,
your not talking with her
shes now your foe.
you regret the day
you said goodbye
she walked away
you started to cry.
you regret the day
you said those words
that were on your mind,
you were angry,
you were mad,
the words were so undefined.
you regret the day
you turned your back on her,
over something so stupid
and small,
you regret that day
ever since
that last day on fall.

© 2010 Mickey


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Your words are true. Most of us will regret words said in anger. I like the repetition. Made the purpose of the poem stronger. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


its a little weird how it changed from four lines to 5, but somehow it flows... i like.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Mickey
Mickey

Brooklyn, NY



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