Second Best`~

Looking into your eyes, i see the pain that you have been through.

your aching heart screams out in agony...

but what if i was here to tell you that everything is going to be okay?

would you even care?

you taste like perfection..

your touch moves me in ways unimagionable,

but i geuss i'll always be second best in your eyes...

Hold my hand and we can walk this road together,

because nothing compares to your kiss,

and the way you say you love me,

lifts my spirit high,

but then i remember

that im always going to be second best....

Reviews

[Emunah June.]

Self worth is the hardest price to gain nowadays, huh? It hurts, its true, but you're recovering the only way you know how: by writing. And that makes it all better--well, I should say almost all better.

[kerri]

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[Petal]

AWWWWWWW :'( that was adorable and sad

[Luna Northstar]

This poem tugged at my heart and made me tear up a little.... It's so sad, I mean, even if he pledged his love to you it wouldn't matter:

"and the way you say you love me,
lifts my spirit high,
but then I remember
that im always going to be second best..."


In the back of your mind are those two words "second best." It really puts the reader in your position...

The poem had a bittersweetness to it... it was short and simple, yet had a message that can't be forgotten so easily. Kind of eerie, but really sad and taunting.... I love it