beggar women

i miss you

oh

mother of my heart

you have no home

nor have you begotten a son

or daughter

you have no shelter

but you can stay

here 

away from the dark

come in from the rain

i will be your shelter

oh beggar women

don't you know

i am the messiah of your people

Reviews

[Emily]

Very nice wording and poem!
Well done!

[Jen Walters]

This is a sad poem, too true of the reality around us. Too many people are now homeless and not being or choosing not to be helped. Sweet and kind though because you are offering to take them in here in this poem. Come in to my house and I shall give you shelter, sit at my table and you shall eat and have good food. All it takes is one kind act to change the world. Thanks and have a great day.

[Valentine]

A sad write as there are so many people homeless around the world. Valentine

[Fatema]

oh dear sister
this is a beautiful poem
this is a sad poem
but yet beautiful

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

i liked this one for two reasons; it was cleanly written without jumbked metaphors and misguided word choice, and secondly it was about a kind of woman I knew well

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

A sad account of how our heart goes to such people who are victims of fate.
Good one!