One more day..

 

I Wish,

  to have, just one more day

  in my life with you!

To show

how much i care you

how much i feel you

how much i love you

but..

  to realise it,

  you actually need to love me..

 

I Guess you never understood me

all of these years

that we had togeather honey...

 

 

-Eternal Kim

Author's Note

My love story... u never realized my love dear!

Reviews

[Vaishali..^_^]

ah..!this is so sad ....!^_^

[Kimberly_ eternal dream..]

i originally wrote from my life.. it's always that, wen ppl knw how much v love tem tey'l never leave us! but tey'l go without understanding our love!

[Eagle Cruagh]

This must be an excellent poem.
After reading it, I sat and thought about
it for about ten minutes. Wondering,
anxious, confused.
You impact the reader with power and
visual pressure. The effect is vivid.

So few words are used, with such dramatic
effect.

Very, very good writing.

----- Eagle Cruagh

[Jinx's Heart]

Aww! This is a sad story. Very simply and well written for something so deep. Very nice!