One more day..

One more day..

A Poem by Kimberly_ eternal dreames..

 

I Wish,

  to have, just one more day

  in my life with you!

To show

how much i care you

how much i feel you

how much i love you

but..

  to realise it,

  you actually need to love me..

 

I Guess you never understood me

all of these years

that we had togeather honey...

 

 

-Eternal Kim

© 2009 Kimberly_ eternal dreames..


Author's Note

Kimberly_ eternal dreames..
My love story... u never realized my love dear!

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ah..!this is so sad ....!^_^

Posted 12 Years Ago


i originally wrote from my life.. it's always that, wen ppl knw how much v love tem tey'l never leave us! but tey'l go without understanding our love!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This must be an excellent poem.
After reading it, I sat and thought about
it for about ten minutes. Wondering,
anxious, confused.
You impact the reader with power and
visual pressure. The effect is vivid.

So few words are used, with such dramatic
effect.

Very, very good writing.

----- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aww! This is a sad story. Very simply and well written for something so deep. Very nice!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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