Casting!

Casting!

A Poem by Thomas Fitzgerald
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Just a spell to make one think of times gone by.

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Sickened shells cast in oil blue and toned for the royal,

Placid screams shiver for pox to be added quiver,

Elves nails upon tin leave crunch on the skin,

Liver rises in hosts not fit poisons of toast,

Lost fellows now drink before time shakes and winks.

© 2013 Thomas Fitzgerald


Author's Note

Thomas Fitzgerald
Just something fun - read it with that in mind.

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Nice to see your work again Thomas. as always it makes you concentrate and think even this one which has a number of images and dark messages.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
I like the poem. Short statements led reader to good places and thoughts. I was glad to see your name on the board. Always a pleasure to read your work my friend.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
A very different kind of poem and unique, I will go with first L.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you x
Very unusual read, was fun and unique.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you x
Cute indeed..........love the last line - yes, cast the spell and drink before time shakes and winks before ye blink as you clink the glasses of liver poison

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you Sheila.
A clever acrostic. I can tell you enjoyed writing this one. The time to drink before time shakes and winks is now. A fun read.

exotic

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you, I did!
Tell me, Tom...can this spell be cast with pints of Guinness in a circle, instead of standing stones? P.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Indeed it can, in fact it's the best way!
Good one...an acrostic day ha..I like that last line...enjoyed Thomas...Rose:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you love.
From my youth - really good s**t man!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Well I salute your youth! thank you

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Added on July 4, 2013
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Tags: Spell, magic, Witch, Olden

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Thomas Fitzgerald
Thomas Fitzgerald

Wexford, Leinster, Ireland



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