Thomas.

Thomas.

A Poem by Thomas Fitzgerald
"

A study of me.

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Tommy was bold, 
Tommy was cute,
Tommy was fine,
Tommy played flute.

Gay was Tommy,
Sexy was Tommy,
Men he had Tommy,
Afraid he wasn't Tommy.

© 2011 Thomas Fitzgerald


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I really enjoyed that little contrast you had, as if the first stanza described childhood Tommy, and the second one described the grown up Tommy. And also the way you described the childhood innocence, and then a little bit of adult naughtiness, and also your happiness and high self-esteem, and this shows how important it is to love oneself. I love this succinct write, and yet there is great meaning behind it. I enjoyed reading.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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lol.....a terrific tribute to the assuredness of self. When there is confidence there is definitely sexiness...nice job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Excellent soul baring study of Tommy :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Thomas Fitzgerald
Thomas Fitzgerald

Wexford, Leinster, Ireland



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