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pointless designations

A Poem by chemical rave rink
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Just starting out, formats most likely atrocious

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He stares at the rotting and decay of fruits not yet ripe.

They plunder and screech pervading through existence.

Their chemicals malfunction, their actions redundant.

No one learns, but no one seems to care.

 

Are there any ripe fruits?

There are, here and there. 

A change needs to happen,

Sadly no one seems to care.

 

© 2013 chemical rave rink


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there are ripe ideas and thoughts...but we need to act on them before they overripe...and decay...

often the apathy just settles in...and there is no fruit left from which to reap benefits.

jacob

Posted 11 Years Ago


chemical rave rink

11 Years Ago

very true, wrote this a few years ago.
-thank you

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chemical rave rink
chemical rave rink

bing, NY



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Hey there I'm kevin, just posting some of my thoughts and whatnot. im twenty two, live in upstate new york and planning on being a teacher eventually. Life is beautiful and I'm slowly developing the i.. more..

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