Lifting the Veil
A Book by Kristin Lee
 A crisis of faith leaves a desperate woman hopeless and heartbroken. Can she conquer deaths darkness before her dwindling faith runs out? Or will grief’s insidiousness finally claim her soul?  © 2013 Kristin Lee
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Any feedback is much appreciated! Thanks.
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Featured Review
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Kristen, I liked this. The grief fueld emotion cut through me like a knife. I became immersed in this story and felt the chill as the snow covered her body. This was very sad but I am more than certain a shroud that many people might wear, even those we come in contact with everyday, though we fail to notice.
I do think underlining words is not necessary in this piece, for the intensity is truly felt in your words. Very nice, will there be more to this?
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much for the review! I've really been hoping to get feedback on this one.
read moreThank you so much for the review! I've really been hoping to get feedback on this one.
This manuscript was composed in Scrivener. The program uses the underline instead of itlaics when it converts documents to Word format. So anything seen underlined is supposed to be in italics. I waiverd a lot on the use, just because I was aiming for strong imagery. Sounds like I may have achieved it? I hope.
And yes, it is my goal to have more to this story. This portion was writen as a short story for a contest with a limitation on words. But I've fallen in love with the characters and their lives, so I am working on more.
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11 Years Ago
Please let me know when you post more as I too have grown fond of your characters and would love to .. read morePlease let me know when you post more as I too have grown fond of your characters and would love to read it.
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This looks to be an intriguing tale and I look forward to diving in. Unfortunately, my night must come to a close, because morning comes so soon. I added this book to my reading list and I will be sure to come back soon and read it. I hope I'll be of encouragement and help to you when I read what you have posted so far.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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I love it!!!! Can't wait to read the whole strory.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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11 Years Ago
Thanks! After reading your poem I thought it might be of interest :)
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Kristen, I liked this. The grief fueld emotion cut through me like a knife. I became immersed in this story and felt the chill as the snow covered her body. This was very sad but I am more than certain a shroud that many people might wear, even those we come in contact with everyday, though we fail to notice.
I do think underlining words is not necessary in this piece, for the intensity is truly felt in your words. Very nice, will there be more to this?
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much for the review! I've really been hoping to get feedback on this one.
read moreThank you so much for the review! I've really been hoping to get feedback on this one.
This manuscript was composed in Scrivener. The program uses the underline instead of itlaics when it converts documents to Word format. So anything seen underlined is supposed to be in italics. I waiverd a lot on the use, just because I was aiming for strong imagery. Sounds like I may have achieved it? I hope.
And yes, it is my goal to have more to this story. This portion was writen as a short story for a contest with a limitation on words. But I've fallen in love with the characters and their lives, so I am working on more.
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11 Years Ago
Please let me know when you post more as I too have grown fond of your characters and would love to .. read morePlease let me know when you post more as I too have grown fond of your characters and would love to read it.
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Kristin LeePortland, OR
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I write with a no holds barred attitude, wielding my pen like a dagger to carve tales of fiction entwined with hard and bitter truths. My work generates bold, sometimes dark and devious stories that .. more..
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