ALL HEART?

For Noodlehead 03 30 13

No body fat
No penis
No problem

Author's Note

Would you believe I've been sitting on these seven words for over ten years? I sat on them while the resentment I harboured towards my male brethren festered infinitely against the backdrop of years in an all-male dorm...Noodle's poem All Heart brought them back to mind :P

Reviews

[Pax]

hahaha.... i really find this funny...pardon me my friend for that... :D
but the ending "no problem" ~ gives a great positive outlook... so you should remember that always... if nobody likes you so you say "no problem" ~ its their lost... :D

awesome!!!

[kublakhan27]

Haha I'm glad it made you laugh my friend :) I never thought of looking at it that way before but it's true haha Many thanks :D

[Traci]

Out of all your poems, I chose this one to review first, lol.
What can I say.... 7 words, very creative!

[kublakhan27]

Haha Thank you Traci :) I wouldn't want them all to be seven words long, but I do wish I could be more concise at times :P

[DIVYA]

"No penis
No problem" - :)))) Indeed! A great way of putting an end to half of the world's problems! Though unaware of the background in which this was written but really loved it.

[kublakhan27]

Haha yeah no kidding...I'm glad it made you laugh ;)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

You know, at first blush this is a slap in the fact of wit, but upon deeper pondering I find a myriad of metaphors to explore here.

[kublakhan27]

It has taken on that feel for me as well as I've gotten older, which I never would have banked on years ago :P

[stephen dillon]

the best poem yet please tell me i am doing this right

[kublakhan27]

Haha well if people can write six-word stories, they can also write seven-word poems...many thanks again.

[Androglossia]

"Hmm..i don't think so." An honest statement that sparked at the back of my head when I read this:D

[kublakhan27]

:D

[Androglossia]

What! LOL, I'm basing my statement on my own orientation:)

[kublakhan27]

LOL ;)

[Baby Ricochet]

HA!

[kublakhan27]

:)

[icelandicblue]

This is so amusing. The brevity really heightens the humor.

[kublakhan27]

Thank you, glad it made you laugh :)

[Frieda P]

Bhahaha, you're too much Steve, as per my review to Sye, the lil' noodle of our hearts....


BARBIES ARE STUPID...

[kublakhan27]

;D

[Frieda P]

Hahaha still laughing! xD

[kublakhan27]

:D