REVERIE OF HOODWINKS IN THE UNHOLY PLAY DEN (Collab with FRIEDA)

09 29 14

felt my fever spike as our eyes locked

we're best defined by this

exact fragile moment in time

formed by past chain reaction's

delivered storybook attestations

power of suggestive validation

rerouted your unwieldy intentions

future lies beneath tissue paper clouds

fragile as blown glass figurine promises

placed on dusty shelves waiting to be noticed

want to boogie woogie in your dark allure

be your personal one woman cabaret act

smoke and mirror you into submission

you've already whirled my head

a shade of primed persuasion

well before the augmentation

of a silver reverie of cigarette swirls

dangled shutters of licentious atmospherics

on the hoodwinks of your unholy glares

harbouring angelicism in a melody's upholstered

candy coat of impish coos and cackles

sultry octaves of abstinent restraint

almost nullify the need for eyes in your morose

aplomb's satin black reverberations

to the hushed chagrin of my mercurial pursuit

of well-rounded sensual attainment

from the delectation of your entertainment

want to be your delicate dish of appetite's savor

pour into me like a vintage Bordeaux's fragrance

a fragile inflammation that gets under your skin

spins the boundaries of lined defiance

crossing over into shooting range's aim

hits below the belt's blessed trespasses

angels humming a few bars of numbing wet whistles

banging on the door in the rise of elation's misdeeds

lightning rod smittenness extends a humid adamancy

rubbed in choreography attesting to the polish

in which you could marinate the culmination

of this night with those implied pantomime

fondles of the air in slender arms' satin-gloved sways

phases of illumination nestle like sweat in the dress

that wears skin's erogenous becoming when your legs

shimmy in taut rebellions echoing the lurid swoons

administering tickle torture to my inner ears

this charmed playpen of the lion's roaring den

three sheets to the winds of animalism's quenched cravings

be my Harvey Wallbanger and I'll intoxicate your every whimsy

Author's Note

Reviews

[redzone]

well, Steve and Frieda, this poem is a melodic "cabaret" of dark!!! or is that a dark chardonay??? I can understand "Hoodwinks" if you are doing Harvey's, hell thats a recipe for lots of intoxicated whimsy, not to mention smitten adamancy.. is it possible you two have created the very first Cabaret of "Smitten Mirrored Illusioned Dark Wallbanger Whimsy"!!! The sign over the door says: "Beware All Who Enter Here- Hoodwinks Practiced!! Nothing Is Real"!!! (in the fine print is says: "You will leave erogenously different than when you came in. Guaranteed. Or Your Money Back).

Thank you Frieda, Steve, I was mesmerized by the flow between you, the musical cabaret and oh yes, the "Hoodwinks". Smoke and mirrors are so much fun when Harvey Wallbanger is around!!! ;0)
~~redzone

[kublakhan27]

Haha I should start by pointing out that Frieda brought Harvey to the party, so that's on her ;) The story behind this one is quite interesting...it was inspired by the music, which she sent to me not realizing that I was listening to that very music the night before...in light of all the music that I could have been listening to on youtube, I think that was a sign that this one was meant to be written...your reviews are a blast as always my friend...so glad you enjoyed our latest little adventure :)

[Troy Henson]

Again you two amaze me. Alone you are brilliant but together a force to be reckoned with:) The flow this delivered was excellent. It just rolled off the tongue nicely.

Excellent write between the two of you.

Troy

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

OMG, is all I can say.

Kaze~

[Einstein Noodle]

i like the way you two use the title in parts .. midway and at the end .. nice touch says i .. lends cohesive chemistry ;)
the strengths of you both are clear but one weaves a spell into the other .. so nice job says i!
too many bewitching lines to pick only a few .. a poetic mind sexipade :)
challenging, teasing and entertaining collab.
E.

[Pryde Foltz]

this charmed playpen of the lion's roaring den

three sheets to the winds of animalism's quenched cravings
be my Harvey Wallbanger and I'll intoxicate your every whimsy

A great collar … you two have a style perfectly suited to one another … very very smart.

PSST … where is the lovely Frieda keeping herself these days?

[Beccy]

You two are the perfect foil for each other. I was fascinated throughout and took a guess at who wrote what,. I think I go it right, but the collaboration was such a perfect melding of styles, that my conclusion seemed quite superfluous.

Beccy.

[kublakhan27]

So glad you enjoyed our collab Beccy, we've done many of them and have a pretty good feel for each other's style now, and of course, we have a blast doing them.

[TL Boehm]

I want a beer now. And a cigarette. And I don't even smoke.
Formidable bantering and wordplay in this - the crave is palpable in this one.
Well penned.

[kublakhan27]

Haha Thank you TL, so glad you enjoyed it...we had a lot of fun doing this one.

[writing mojo]

I get the feeling of tongue torque for verbal lashings..one will swing and the advances..so much beauty in the dark at heart. .passion interns obsession. .i think you got the balance perfect in this piece..excellent

[kublakhan27]

We've been collaborating on poems for at least a year now, and we try as many different styles as possible...our last couple have been dialogue/exchange-type pieces, which have been a lot of fun, as our muses seem to challenge each other to up the 'advance' ante with each successive bit...thanks as always my friend.

[David Scott]

I like how you undressed cliché and pour the reader a perfectly balance glass of poetic ambrosia in this write. I can see the influence of our fiery Frieda here as well.
Great collective effort!

[kublakhan27]

Haha Yes her presence is hard to miss...thank you David :)

[icelandicblue]

Well I shall marinate in your heady words you two. I honestly don't know how you do this thing you do! A pleasure to read as always. Great verbal exchange you've got, quite pithy.

[kublakhan27]

Haha Well we've been doing these for about a year now so our chemistry is pretty good :) So glad you enjoyed it my friend.