The peace

 

Alone Sometimes We Want To Be

No one sometimes we have to Be

 No hand should hold You

No bond should bind You

Just go away, far away, stay away

 Just you,your breath,your heart beat

 The wind that blows your hair says to your life cheer

 The sun that sweats your skin makes your mind clear

 The flying birds, the charming river, the growing trees will whispers in your ear,,,,,,,, 

"Hey Human,this is heaven and you are here!!!"...........

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree.
"The wind that blows your hair says to your life cheer,,,,,,,,,
The sun that sweats your skin makes your mind clear,,,,,,,,
The flying birds, the charming river, the growing trees will whispers in your ear,"
This is real peace. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Kuldeep desai]

thank you for your review........i am glad that you have liked it............

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Isolated shall be the life, where my peace lies.
Really adorable. usually people find such things boring. Glad u wrote about it.

[Kuldeep desai]

sometimes being in peace will be boring but sometimes we need a lot..........that's what i am trying to say thanks for the review...........

[Arshia]

Hey..very well written..each of the emotions are so true. Just u,ur breath, ur heart beat!
Great job :)

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you.....

[Tasfia Islam]

woww.....its simply outstanding....keep it up..... u got a real power of thinking.... :)

[Kuldeep desai]

thank you for your review...... i am happy for your compliments........and i hope that you will watch my coming works

[Poetic Beauty]

We all need that time alone to know who we are without influences from the surrounding world. Great thought provoking write.

[Kuldeep desai]

thank u......

[M.A.Rathore]

Nice thoughts with nice expression.
Keep writing. You will surely able to convey your ideas ...
Here is a suggestion...
Please use spellings in detail. Do not use ur for your...u for you.. i think you would not use such words in your next poem....
Have a nice time!

[Kuldeep desai]

thank you mr.Rathore that means a lots to me....

[M.A.Rathore]

I hope greetings...

[New Theory]

Good one, sometimes just being free, just being you is the best feeling in the world.

[Kuldeep desai]

Ofcourse there is a grammatical mistake and I am trying to work it out....