PEARL

PEARL

A Poem by Kuldeep desai
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"Someone Who Steals our Heart"

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A drop of the rain falling on her cheek forms a dew

i could see there a Pearl.

A cold breeze that blows her hair

My Heart got started to whirl.

She rush to dance in the rain

who seems like an fountain

 

A tiny bag hanging on her hand

Swirling all over.

Tightly Embraced her hair band

Trying to jump with her.

My shirt button was open 

She stepped Inside, Making my heart her own.

 

 

 Loving, Caring never letting down

 always a complete daughter.

Teasing, enjoying hanging with her friends

always bringing around laughter.

All she was Beauty with the mind,

One day she might be mine or Someone's,

 Once i wanted to hold her hand. 

 

 I could imagine a darkest night

Standing by the river side,

A Sailing boat reaches the shore

Someone steps out dressed like Bride,

Holding the lamp tending towards to me

there she comes my girl,

Background was dark and in the lamp light when i see, only her face

i could see there a Pearl.

 

 

© 2016 Kuldeep desai


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A romantic poem. Nice thoughts

Posted 4 Years Ago


Kuldeep desai

4 Years Ago

thank you and i am glad that you have liked it.........
Beautifully described, pearls are just so simple yet so bright and valuable....
some pretend it very cheap white stone, but i think it holds the hidden secrets which turn it white and all the feelings that relate to the pearl make it shine....
This poem feels just as absolute reality that one can feel by reading this poem...
outstanding...
(just re-read and try to rectify some errors like - she rushes, a fountain etc.)
good write...
Anindita

Posted 5 Years Ago


Kuldeep desai

5 Years Ago

Thank you.....I am glad that you have liked it......
What is not a heart that can't be stolen? Its always up for grabs. A nice write. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Kuldeep desai

5 Years Ago

Thank you......
a sweet poem of love and feelings

Posted 5 Years Ago


Kuldeep desai

5 Years Ago

Thank you...........i am glad you have liked it......
Amazing poem,
I loved the way you have penned your feelings for someone who steals your heart...
:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Kuldeep desai

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words..........
This builds warmth, a really lovely read.
There are a few minor fixes, but keep writing it only gets better x

Posted 5 Years Ago


Kuldeep desai

5 Years Ago

Yeah i did few corrections............I hope you will read and support me in the future like you hav.. read more
The poem is amazing and perfect.
"I could imagine a darkest night
Standing by the river side,
A Sailing boat reaches the shore
Someone steps out dressed like Bride,
Holding the lamp tending towards to me
there she comes my girl,
Background is dark and in the lamp light when i see only her face
i could see their a Pearl."
The above lines. Haunting and beautiful. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


Kuldeep desai

5 Years Ago

Hey man I don't know who you are but i think you are the one of the few person in this site, who is .. read more
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are a good writer and thank you for the kind words.
But for a few word corrections here and there, it's a beautiful poem. Keep writing, it keeps getting lovelier, every time.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Kuldeep desai

5 Years Ago

I did correct few things........but still i will try to improve in those aspects...........Thank you.. read more
Great first line!
Keep it up!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Kuldeep desai

5 Years Ago

Thank you for always showing your response and being supportive...............
This is clearly very heart felt. I particularly love the last two lines.
Because I know you are interested in feedback, "their" should be spelled "there" if it means "in that place"

Posted 5 Years Ago


Kuldeep desai

5 Years Ago

I did those few corrections.........Thank you for being So supportive...............You are doing a .. read more

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Added on April 29, 2016
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Kuldeep desai
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Bengaluru, India



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