Killer

just some after- Halloween horror

Blood steadily trickles down,

Metal dipped with it.

A smile came from a frown,

Life ends a quickly as I can hit.

 

I hear people screaming,

The power delights me.

It's fun to chase the fleeing,

Blood is what I want to see.

 

The corpses dance for me now,

As blood drains from them.

I am almighty, I want you to bow,

You must follow my every whim.

 

A bloodthirsty smile I can't contain,

Though I know that I am insane.

Reviews

[AleyshaRosa]

Wow, I actually felt like an accomplice to a serial killer; insane.
Your visuals are strong, commanding, demanding and I l o v e this poem.
Koodoos
=]

[♪Barklight♪]

Should we all be afraid...? :P

[deepblue04]

I can really feel the emotions from this, good job!

[Calibaster]

It is very descriptive. but, not really my favorite subject. no offense.

[Forever Hidden]

Looovee it! Well only because i love horros and thrillers XD

Good write :P

[Harley (arbiter)]

Very nicely done. I liked it a lot