IT IS'NT SUCH A BAD DAY

I was running around to get my hustle-on, could do nothing i thought, then here i am without what i intended to gain in the day but still i reached out in a way no money can...this life is crazy (lol)

In the morning…

 

On the other side today I awoke,

Low spirited and broke,

I took a sip of coke,

And thought…

“This life’s a b***h, it chokes”

It isn’t a joke,

The feeling is so bad like a stroke,

My lord its you I invoke,

Rescue me or I be yoked,

 

Afternoon…

The day went by with no gain,

All my efforts went down the drain,

The 98 accord had a flat tire, in the rain

The whole situation only elevated my pain,

“What have you achieved today?” I thought in my brain

 

In the evening…

 

My cellphone rang,

It was my friend and needs me to come to his aid,

He said “my wife is sick and needs blood, come and rescue me”

I rushed to the scene and hope to wash away his misery,

Fortunately we have the same blood group,

And I was laid as a donor,

My inner self smiled for it was such an honor,

On the stretcher I supplicated,

“Thank you lord, for in my needs”

“I still have something via which someone I can feed”

“Not so a bad day indeed”

Cause I reached out.

And it made my day,

More than any mount of pay.

 

Reviews

[Enigma]

WOW!! I agree, the feeling one gets from helping others is heavenly.Surely it makes our day too.The poem effectively describes that days aren't bad.It's our outlook that classifies them as good or bad.Like a flat tire in the rain.I might have taken it to be an opportunity to have a delightful walk to home in rain.Just somethinmg I thought I'd share...lol
One more thing. It can be a rocking rap song.It has it's own rhythm and well, something people need to hear (or read) about.
Great Write!!! I loved it!!

[Barbara Walker]

This made me smile! Ya just never know what the day is gonna bring to you. I like your out-look. This would make a great rap song. Thanks for sharing! Barbara

[Tai Chi Italy]

I like this poem very much Kurrupted, because is rises from the humdrum of life and saves one. A great day in the making. Smiling at you, Tai