Hope

Hope

A Poem by kyam
"

doubt

"
I am not a believer in doubt
So I say without
That being said
Forget what may be ahead

You know who I am
Quit giving me a scam
Either you are or your not
Try to fill the spot

You get my hopes high
Then abandon me, why?
Are you more scared
A sign that says "Beware?"

Dedicate yourself to me
Set yourself free
Take a chance 
For the best romance

© 2016 kyam


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Love with another will always be a hit or miss activity it seems. Doubt always seems to come just before commitment for those timid or shy. I like this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


You get my hopes high
Then abandon me, why?
Are you more scared
A sign that says "Beware?"

Then hope fly in sky
Every moment of hope
With joy happiness see in side
Life is Life, Bewared every time


Posted 8 Years Ago


Beautiful poem! Love the flow and rhyme, my fave was the last stanza,

Dedicate yourself to me
Set yourself free
Take a chance
For the best romance

Posted 8 Years Ago


kyam

8 Years Ago

Welcome and thank you for the review! You are so kind.....Kyam
Cyprian Van Dyke

8 Years Ago

You're very welcome!
Nice write my friend:) always happy to read you:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


kyam

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your wonderful soothing words that feel like lotion to chapped skin....Grateful Always.. read more
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8 Years Ago

Smiles your welcome:)
The more I read the more song I hear in your words. You bring beauty from your pain. Nicely done as always, my dear! I feel your heart each and every time...................... Thank you for that!

Posted 8 Years Ago


kyam

8 Years Ago

You are an amazing man with an amazing heart to share. I want you to know that your reviews mean so .. read more
 1

8 Years Ago

Heart to heart; we were made to help each other through the storms of life, the sad thing is most do.. read more
Very nice. There is so much underneath this brief piece you did a great job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kyam

8 Years Ago

Thank you from the bottom of my heart! You read me correctly and I'm astonished, and happy. My gra.. read more

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Added on May 14, 2016
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Author

kyam
kyam

Clarksville, IN



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I have just recently started writing and am a mere novice. I enjoy short stories and poems. I've had an immense amount of pain in my life and I would say that's my greatest source of writing to heal.. more..

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